How can we avoid crimes?

In the class of Language, with Andrea, we wrote a letter. In this letter we should write about:

Whose responsability is it to prevent the crime? Write a letter to the editor explaining your views. Give specific examples of what the police can do to protect themselves and their neighbours.

1. Start the letter, "Dear editor"
2. Use the "useful expressions"

• Introductory comments = 1 (one)
• Agreeing = 3 (three)
• Explaining your views = 2 (two)
• Claryfing = 2 (two)

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Dear editor, 

                 I read your article about crimes and how to avoid them. I am a resident of Adrogue, I fully support the fact that there are more crimes.

For this reason I believe that the police should patrol the streets at all times. That is to say that they should be walking in the streets looking around. They should install cameras in the srteet for more safety.

I fully agree with people that say that we should protect ourselves. Therefore, I will suggest some things for people to protect their homes. People should have railings installed or maybe have a group of neighbours, in other words, neighbours should be in constant communicaiton.

As a conclusion, both, police and citizens should cooperate to make a safe neighbourhood. So, I fully recommend using one of these suggestions. Last but not least, be careful n the streets! Do not use the cellphone and avoid talking with strangers.

                                                             Thank you!

                                                                            Federico